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key words: the warden of your local park,
report, making some suggestions, how the
appearance of the park can be improved
To: Mike Stephens, Shipton Park Warden
From: Stephen Grimes, Assistant Park Warden
Subject: Suggestions for improving Shipton Park
Date: 5th January
Introduction
The aim of this report is to suggest ways of
improving Shipton Park to make the park more
attractive and popular.
Appearance
The park is in need of more plants, flowers and
trees. Therefore, I suggest that more gardeners
be employed by the council. In this way, the
park would look better for visitors. Also, there
is a lot of litter in the park. I strongly
recommend an increased number of litter bins
and fines for visitors who litter the park.
Facilities
To begin with, I feel the park’s facilities could
be improved. At the moment, there is no
children’s playground, so one should be built.
In addition, a cafeteria could be opened and a
small football pitch constructed.
Conclusion
To sum up, I believe that these recommendations
would improve the park immensely and
encourage more people to use it.